Rebecca received a half-developed novel concept and tackled it head-on. Despite the fractured outline—where only the main beats were fleshed out—she managed to see the larger picture. Her commitment stood out; rather than giving up or taking the easy route, she produced a fully realised set of notes. These covered key strengths, thoughtful tone analysis, a breakdown of the main character, and clear guidance on which supporting characters need expansion or trimming. The plot analysis in particular deserves credit. Handling such a fragmented draft, Rebecca still identified where the story shines, where it falters, and which elements may not hold up in the final draft. Her insight into the worldbuilding was equally sharp, pinpointing what to emphasise earlier, what to develop more deeply, and what already works well. This feedback went beyond a beta read—it was developmental in the best sense. Rebecca’s ability to analyse structure, character, and tone will dramatically influence the direction of the final story. I strongly recommend her services to any writer seeking clarity, honesty, and meaningful guidance.